Shallow Waters *revised**awarded*
Death lurks, disdain its servant, upon my soul whose destiny is to be forsaken... not found the Book of Life but at the command of demonic keepers of disillusionment. I've escaped blood-splattered...
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What an impactful read this is! Truly enjoyed the bittersweet pangs within the lines Rick. You bring out the haunting darkness with flair. Skillfully rendered read, well done! Lit with Kick!
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Thanks a lot, Gabriella, I'm very much appreciative of your wonderful comments on my poem! Take care, Rick
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Gripping images and good flow of emotions. Deep spill from your pen. Excellent write Rick...I loved every word!
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Thanks for your awesome responses, Moon and Lanaia! Take care, Rick
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holy crap this was good..... it really grabbed the reader's attention.... i really liked this one.... so deep....but so visual. . . . .
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i knew as i stepped into this it would ache all the way to the soul as only you can in your shares dear Found ... my friend, this is awesome! ~hugs~ ~ Secret ~
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*snoopy dance*.....hi Rick....hi Rick...how are you? so nice to see you...have missed you....so happy you are here.... i really love this.....it's darkness is soooo delicious..... you take care........
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Hi 1psychofemale1, I originally wrote this a year ago but found it wasn't nearly as dark as I wanted so I'm glad you like it. Thanks! Take care, Rick
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Hi Sweet Sis Secret, You're so kind, as always. Thanks for the heart-warming words and beautiful award! Take care, *hugs* Found Rick
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Hi Alexis, I always liked the Snoopy dance, so carefree. Thanks very much! Take care, *hugs* Rick
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Congratulations Lost!! "I've escaped blood-splattered environs again and again; glimpses of relief torture in their fragility...always I awaken with lungs full of sorrow and soul shattered." A Scribe...
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